After a long day of running Anna discovered that her head had grown a book. She had just walked in the door and she was very tired. She walked over to the fridge and poured herself a glass of water. When she was finished drinking she layed down on the couch to read a book.
Suddenly she felt something weired on her head. "Ouch!" she said and rubbed her head. Then she went back to reading her book. In the middle of reading her book she was so tired from running all day.
The next morning she woke up and her her head felt heavier for some reason but she didn't think anything about it until she looked in the mirror. "Ahhhhh" she yelled as she looked in the mirror and saw what looked like a book that had grown out of her head "What can I do to cover it up when I go to school". She did everything she could think of to cover up the book. She Tried every hat in the house that they had but they were all too small to cover up the book. Finally she thought of a solution.
Before she went to school that day she went to the dollar store and bought a wig that was big enough to fit over the book. You would think that she wouldn't want to leave her room with a book sticking out of her head but when she put on her coat she just put her hood up (I don't know why she didn't just go to school that way). When she walked into her classroom that day she was lucky.........
that it was Halloween or else she would of looked weird. There was only one little problem that she forgot about. At the end of every Halloween day at her school there was a bully that ripped off everyone's hats that they wear with there costumes and that bully........was standing right behind her. Rip!!! He ripped off her wig and EVERYONE was staring at her. This was a night mare....a horrible night mare. "Why couldn't I have just stayed home" she thought to herself. "Anna come here" she heard someone say softly. Suddenly she felt someone shaking her and she opened her eyes and found out that it was just a night mare. She was so glad that there wasn't actually a book growing out of her head. She was so happy.
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I liked it very much. You had great detail and the story flowed pretty good. You were creative even though the words that were chosen for you were a little wacked. I hope that next time you try to intrigued the reader more into your weriting by using some more interesting vocabulary and description.
ReplyDeleteI love your story _ _ _ _ _ _ _! LOL....You have very good voice in the story and all of your other masterpieces. That story sort of made me feel sad for the girl that was being bullied. You also had very descriptive words that made it seem real
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